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4 DAcontest: Reasonable sins 4 Train your brain by LadyALT69 4 DAcontest: Reasonable sins 4 Train your brain by LadyALT69
I'm wowed on the results. I'm wanting critique for this so here you go :3. This is Lustia she is one of the 7 deadly sins, Lust
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This is an improvement from the last time you updated and possible the most original piece of artwork I've seen in your gallery. Although, you still need to work on your anatomy. The face being the one you need to work on. The face is up too high and the eyes should be halfway down the face and then work your way down from that. the ear should also be straight across to the tip of the nose. The waist needs some help as the anatomy is also off. good job with the proper leg length of 1 1/2 heads for the thigh and 2 heads for the shin although the thigh should be thicker. I gave it 1.5 stars for vision because although you have improved it doesn't catch my attention or strike me as visually stunning. I gave you 3.5 stars for originality because it's the most original thing I've seen in your gallery. I gave you .5 stars for impact because it doesn't leave an ever lasting impression on me or create many feelings to me. Hope this helps.
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Vision: I can see where you are coming from, the concept is very easy to see that you wanted something slightly teasing and sensual. But at the same time it's not done very well, the shading is off by a long shot, as is the coloring and general build of the picture.

So 2.5 on Vision because you tried with heart but failed.

Originality: This was simple, you clearly did something original and never done on your account by making this art. But It's still not very original, half naked heart holding clawed demon/dragon women are the farthest thing from original because people draw them all the time.

3.5, You tried and it's the most original for you but that's not saying much really.

Technique: Honestly very terrible, As I've said the colors are off, shading, light affect. Everything is very very off when it comes to that, but the drawing is also very terrible. You can see where the tail meets the body that it's very abnormal and awkward. The claws are all different lengths and pointing in a different direction. The lines are all pretty rough and it doesn't look like you put much effort into smoothing them out at all. The straps of her shirt are really unnatural and it just makes the picture look poorly constructed.

.5, Very very poor technique that needs a lot of work.

Impact: The picture has little to no real impact, it's a carbon copy of so many other images on DA that are of a lesser quality that it takes away from what beauty could have been displayed if you had tried harder and put forth a bit more effort on this piece of work. The impact is negative if at all.

1.5 for this astoundingly bad image.

I however do not think you are a terrible artist at all, you clearly have potential in art. If you work hard, practice daily and maybe have some friends help you with your drawing, watch some tutorials and take advice, with your artistic eye you could be wonderful don't give up. :heart:

[Excuse me for anything that was spelled wrong or if I offended you in any way.]
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Detonatress Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks interesting, I like the idea, but like the critics have said, needs more work on shading (pants mostly) / body proportions. Shading is something I also have trouble with, and pretty sure it goes same for body proportions of some of the characters I've drawn.
I also like her pink hair, though the earring being green makes kind of a weird contrast.
I think it still might have a chance, as it still has potential. Anyway, good job on it. Your shading is definitely better than mine.
LadyALT69 Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :-)
FreddyIsTheBoss Nov 28, 2012  Student Photographer
You've done a very good job on this one. She's very pretty.
LadyALT69 Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
and also seductive thank you :D
Good luck! ;3
LadyALT69 Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D :tighthug:
You're welcome! ;3
LadyALT69 Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ikr cute username btw
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